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In some countries married couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion

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Giving birth is likely to be a serious issue that
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 would carefully consider and plan together. More and more people are becoming kids when they have reached their career's life goal. There are positives and negatives to
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 statement. In my opinion, I agree with those who think they should have a
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 when they are ready, especially in work's life. On the one hand, having an infant at a later
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 might have an impact on the mother and child's health conditions. In terms of the medical area,
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 is the one important factor that could lead to serious health problems
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 as down's syndrome, Autistic;
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 at present many new technologies have been developed to respond needs of new generation
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 as IVF or ICSI which are keen to be more popular, but there are some limitations and have a high cost.
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, health problems of either mother or child are an essential issue to have to carefully recognise in childbirth from a later
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 mother.
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, there are many benefits of having a
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 at a later
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.
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,
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 would have enough time in order to raise their child.
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, if
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 have a stable occupation, they would have welfare
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 as maternity leave when it is the most crucial time for a
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 ,especially for breastfeeding.
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, increasing expense burdens could be handled because
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 tend to have some savings for their children.
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, emotional and physical maturity are ready to build up a
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.
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, married couples are planning to have a
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 when they have success in their career life whether the reasons are enough time, money or maturity. In conclusion, there are positives and drawbacks of having kids at a later
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, so
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 should carefully examine the pros and cons together because the situation of each family would be different.
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