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Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government, while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that an individual's well-being is the government's responsibility while others think that it should be
one
's own responsibility. In my opinion, people should take charge of their own well-being. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the issues and ideas of both arguments and conclude my opinion. If the obligation of a person's well-being is on the government, it gives the public a false sense of security that someone will always take care of them should something happen to their well-being which makes society more reckless and impetuous. Even if the government does take the burden of public well-being, with the resources that the public sector has; they might not be able to cater to all the individuals.
Therefore
, despite having felt that they had security people will end up physically and emotionally troubled.
On the other hand
, by taking care of
one
's own well-being people can lead a healthy lifestyle. In order to keep oneself away from physical and emotional trouble, it is imperative that they look after themselves by maintaining a healthy diet, doing regular exercises, living in a safe environment for peace. Taking care of our own well-being reduces the financial troubles, and more ,importantly keeping away from the hospital will allow us to enjoy life much better. In conclusion, I believe that by taking responsibility for
one
's own well-being
one
 can live longer as
one
 do not have to worry about the physical and financial implications that bad well-being might bring into their life.
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