Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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is
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main issue
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nowadays, it is an often argued issue by many TV programs, Radios, and newspapers.
However
, some say that
noise
should have some
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limits, while others think that sound is an inevitable aspect so as mush as just create when they need. In
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essay, I will discuss both opinions for the following reasons.
To begin
with, certainly,
sound
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should have some restrictions because over
noise
can create any negative effects
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all creatures around the planet.
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, sometimes
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troubles might be extended level while people cannot tolerate,
as a result
, many folks might be reduced the ears hearing capacity. Taking construction
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example, many countries already have been following strict rules
such
as after evening six, no one work who the constructions workers due to
this
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over
noise
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. Obviously,
this
kind of trouble should be avoided so strictly rules
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On the other hand
,
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noise
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unavoidable for during
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process, Without noising you cannot get any buildings or something.
This
means
,
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people can make any kind of
noise
as much as they require.
For instance
, many developed nations buildings are too high like
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, that folk
also
were tolerated the sounds when those apartments
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building,
thus
, now they use more amenities.
Therefore
,
noise
is not a problem so people can use
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much as they want. To conclude,
sound
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is always creating
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problems.
This
can create
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many diseases
to
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the population but
also
the
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all creatures,
this
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inevitable so the public can use as much as they need. In my opinion, about
this
,
noise
has some strict limits,
this
process is conducive to building a healthy community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • noise levels
  • stress
  • disturb sleep
  • imposing legal restrictions
  • peaceful living environment
  • tolerance levels
  • personal freedom
  • business operations
  • designated quiet zones
  • commercial and industrial zones
  • urban areas
  • public awareness campaigns
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