Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Noise
is a
main issue Change the article
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nowadays, it is an often argued issue by many TV programs, Radios, and newspapers. Change preposition
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However
, some say that noise
should have some mendatory
limits, while others think that sound is an inevitable aspect so as mush as just create when they need. In Correct your spelling
mandatory
this
essay, I will discuss both opinions for the following reasons.
To begin
with, certainly, sound
should have some restrictions because over Add an article
the sound
noise
can create any negative effects to
all creatures around the planet. Change preposition
on
In other words
, sometimes this
troubles might be extended level while people cannot tolerate, Correct determiner usage
these
as a result
, many folks might be reduced the ears hearing capacity. Taking construction for
example, many countries already have been following strict rules Add the comma(s)
,for
such
as after evening six, no one work who the constructions workers due to this
can create a
over Change the article
an
noise
. Obviously, Add an article
the noise
this
kind of trouble should be avoided so strictly rules are adhered
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adhere
have adhered
.
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to.
On the other hand
, apparently
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,apparently
noise
is an
unavoidable for during Change the article
apply
working
process, Without noising you cannot get any buildings or something. Add an article
the working
This
means,
people can make any kind of Remove the comma
apply
noise
as much as they require. For instance
, many developed nations buildings are too high like tower
, that folk Add an article
a tower
the tower
also
were tolerated the sounds when those apartments was
building, Change the verb form
were
thus
, now they use more amenities. Therefore
, noise
is not a problem so people can use as
much as they want.
To conclude, Correct pronoun usage
it as
sound
is always creating Add an article
the sound
the
problems. Correct article usage
apply
This
can create the
many diseases Correct article usage
apply
to
the population but Change preposition
for
also
the
all creatures, Remove the article
apply
this
is an
inevitable so the public can use as much as they need. In my opinion, about Change the article
apply
this
, noise
has some strict limits,this
process is conducive to building a healthy community.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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