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Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some argue that having long-term goals is pointless and that living in the now is more important. Both viewpoints are equally important to one’s well-being, in my opinion. On the one hand, making
future
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plans
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 is critical to achieving one’s objectives.
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,
plans
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 with specific goals offer people a feeling of direction,
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allowing them
 to act without becoming
impetutous
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impetuous
 and bewildered.
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, frequently prepare months, if not years, ahead of time to make the most of theirs time and resources.
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Furthermore
, thoroughly detailed
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 enable businesses to create several “what-if”
scenatios
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scenarios
 in
whih
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which
 managers seek to
anticipat
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anticipate
 potential hazards and devise
contigency
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contingency
plans
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 to address them.
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 well-thought-out elaborate schemes empower organizations to react quickly to constantly changing business environments. Focusing on the current moment,
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, is
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 important for a person's well-being.
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 with, it is frequently said that no one can modify their fate;
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, there is nothing a person can do to change their fate.
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, thinking about what could happen in the
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 can lead to excessive concern, depriving many individuals of their emotions of enjoyment for the time being.
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, some people opt to live their lives to the fullest by focusing on each passing moment.
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, because the
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 is unpredictable, precise
plans
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 may be discarded in garbage cans. People may enjoy the world of improvisation as well as welcome changes and shocks if they live in the present. To summarize,
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 feel that striking a balance between planning for the
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 and being present in the
moent
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moment
 is the key to living a meaningful life.

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