Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

It is vital to note that, each and every company use

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to promote their services or products to the customers, and the market demand had created competition among supplier

companies

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. In fact, some argue that the majority of consumers are unaware or lack concentrate on the

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while some point out that

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must implement marketing tricks to attract more clients to their products.

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, I will discuss both these arguments

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and my opinion of using attractive

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to

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more customer revenue for the business. Generally, most of the people who watch television or browse

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are avoiding

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that

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during their work.

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, as

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human

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we used to spend leisure time as we desire, so we used to do some other work or avoid when it played

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. As an example,

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of people purchase Netflix type of movie channels to watch movies or documentaries without marketer’s promotions.

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, marketing

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must implement

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way of marketing material to grab the attention of the consumers to

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their sales through promotions.

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, marketing teams

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nowadays use strategic ways to promote their products by using some

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tricks that grab

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consumers’

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attention. Owing to the global competition,

companies

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must find fresh ways to sell their items to

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buyers while competitors use extraordinary promoting strategies to

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their

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revenue. As an example, Nike Shoe Company paid millions of

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to the famous football player one time to tie his Nike shoe knot when starting the football match.

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that shoe

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companies

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gain

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massive sales revenue due to the popularity of that particular moment.

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is the factor that,

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recruit creative marketing

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to run their promoted materials. To conclude, humans are generally lazy to see promotions whether

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isit

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relative or not to them.

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I believe, sellers should think differently to win consumers attention while

compete

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with other distributors.