some people say that to prevent illnesses and diseases, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is influenced by the environment and housing conditions.

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why some

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opine that governments should focus more on the environment and housing to prevent various ailments. While I do admit that these areas require attention, in my opinion, by simply addressing environmental

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and housing scarcity, we cannot see much of an improvement in public

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. Indeed, environmental

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and dirty surroundings cause many

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problems.

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, air

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is a major issue in cities and,

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many urban residents suffer from respiratory ailments. Lack of access to clean water is another problem that millions of

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face in poor countries. Unhygienic surroundings are the breeding grounds of mosquitoes and fleas which spread many

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.

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, if the

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looks into environmental

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and provides basic housing amenities,

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problems can be avoided to a great extent.

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, simply focusing on the environment and housing will not prevent all

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. The

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has to do much more. It has to allocate a portion of its budget to prevent

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through vaccinations. It should

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spend on screening tests through which serious

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as cancer can be detected long before actual symptoms occur. In earlier ,stages most cancers are totally curable through inexpensive treatments. Launching

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awareness campaigns is another thing governments can do to improve public

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. Even if the

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provides housing to all,

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can still spread if

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are ignorant and allow stagnant water to collect in their surroundings. In conclusion,

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giving priority to environmental issues and housing will improve public

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, a lot more has to be done to eradicate

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. The

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awareness campaigns, provide free vaccinations and regular

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checkups to ensure that

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live a healthy and long life.