Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It can be argued that the majority of

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do not make much effort about the climate

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and their consequences on the environment. I wholeheartedly agree with

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statement and I will explain the reasons why it seems a topic which

people

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looks careless.

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of all, there are many places around the world where are bigger concerns to solve

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. Developing countries,

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, are starving in poverty and they do not have awareness of

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world problem.

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, many of

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people

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are struggling to survive and the government, which has weakness

economic

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economy

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could not help with

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concern too. Another possible reason why

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do not contribute to

reduce

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reducing

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the

environment

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environmental

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impact is the

conflicted

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information. Some

people

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already have the conscious about climate

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and the impacts,

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however

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it is still common

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to see

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people

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discharging wrong things on the

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recycle

bin.

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, in my buildings is

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common

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to see

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, paper with plastic that cannot be

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recycled

recycle

,

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as pizza box in the paper garbage because does not have any explanation about what type of paper could be

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.

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, there are some objects that are extremely harmful to the environment , but it is

ridiculous

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cheaper than the 'green' sustainable version of the same product. Who does never buy something from China just because is cheaper, even though everybody knows that they have

slavory

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slavery

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labour

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, governments, who has the power to

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this

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situation, have done the minimum because there

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a lot of lobby behind the scenes where damaging companies pay for elections campaign and they can manipulate the laws to adequate their interests. To conclude, I believe there are some regions in the world where

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is not the most important topic to matter and some

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do not have

properly

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information to

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their habits.

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, there are few products that the price make some

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buy even knowing how bad

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situation is. Governments should

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change

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there

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their

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regulations to avoid

lobbism

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lobbyism

to protect

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apply

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humanity

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human

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interest

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of selling to detrimental companies.