Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet. Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
With the rise in technology, computers have started to give competition to traditional of providing news ways like
newspapers
and magazines
. I strongly believe that computers will never replace traditional newspapers
and magazines
.
While
the number of people
who use computers and access the internet
increases every day, I find it hard to believe that websites
will totally replace traditional newspapers
and magazines
. From my experience, I have seen people
like my grandmother struggle with the latest technology and hence
, sticking
to the old and traditional ways. To be more specific, Wrong verb form
stick
people
who are technically challenged find it hard to use the internet
and stick to what's more convenient to them. Furthermore
, websites
on the internet
can be taken down and easily hacked while
newspapers
once printed, cannot be changed and have become a part of history which cannot be tampered with. Moreover
, websites
require the internet
to work, which may not be accessible in rural areas whereas
, a newspaper can be easily accessible. In addition
to the points above, advertisements on the internet
are unskippable which can be a nuisance to some people
whereas
the advertisements in newspapers
and magazines
can be easily skipped. Long exposure to such
websites
which use the internet
and a screen can cause nausea and can harm the vision of the people
over time, if not used carefully. Lastly
, websites
can be counter-productive as they can cause a lot of distractions.
To conclude
, I don't think people
will fully accept websites
providing news on the internet
and will stick to the traditional ways like newspapers
and magazines
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