Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It can be argued that the majority of the population do not make much effort about the climate
change
and their consequences on the environment. I wholeheartedly agree with
this
statement and I will explain the reasons why it seems a topic which
people
looks careless.
First
of all, there are many places around the world where are bigger concerns to solve
first
. Developing countries,
for example
, are starving in poverty and they do not have awareness of
this
world problem.
Moreover
, many of these
people
are struggling to survive and the government, which has weakness economy could not help with
this
concern too. Another possible reason why
people
do not contribute to
reduce
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the environmental impact is the
conflicted
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information. Some
people
already have the conscious about climate
change
and the impacts,
however
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it seems common
people
discharging wrong things
on
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the recycle bin.
For example
, in my buildings is quite often to see, paper with plastic that cannot be recycled,
such
as pizza boxes in the paper garbage because does not have any explanation about what type of paper could be
disposal
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.
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Secondly
, there are some objects that are extremely harmful to the environment , but it is ridiculously cheaper than the 'green' sustainable version of the same product. Shoppers always buy something from China just because is cheaper, even though everybody knows that they have slavery labour.
In addition
, governments, who has the power to
change
this
situation, have done the minimum because there is a lot of lobby behind the scenes where damaging companies pay for elections campaign and they can manipulate the laws to adequate their interests. To conclude, I believe there are some regions in the world where
this
is not the most important topic to matter and some
people
do not have
proper
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information to
change
their habits.
Moreover
, there are few products that the price make some
people
buy even knowing how bad
this
situation is. Governments should
also
change
their regulations to avoid
lobbism
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lobbyism
to protect human interest
instead
of selling to detrimental companies.
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  • prioritize
  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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