A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give contact details for when you are away, •give instructions about how to care for your pet, •describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake.

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Dear Lynda, I hope
this
letter finds you well, I’m just writing to let you know that I appreciate your agreement to watch out for my house and cat for next holiday. I’d like to inform you about some extra information, I’ll give the keys to my gatekeeper and you’ll take them from him. When you want to open the door, it’s necessary to enter the security code into my lock, so don’t forget to put it correctly.
Also
for using the electricity devices, you should turn on the bottom
that is
located in front of the kitchen above the desk. You know ‘Lily’ my cat, she is always hungry when she wakes up, so puts her food in her special place every morning. she’s a little shy, Perhaps she won’t show up herself at first but don’t worry she’ll come up when she needs food. It would be better to change her water source daily if it’s possible for you.
Additionally
, I have some plants that have been located just in front of the window, so it’s better to pull the curtains daily to expose them to sunlight fortunately, they don’t need to feed them weekly, I would come back for them. Enjoy your stay, I hope I can make up for it, thank you a lot. Best wishes
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent level of formality throughout the letter. Some parts are slightly less formal, which can affect the coherence and tone.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure every idea is appropriately segmented into paragraphs to achieve maximum clarity.
logical structure
Provide a more structured format for the letter, including clear breaks between different sections such as contact details, pet care instructions, and household duties.
task achievement
You have clearly addressed all parts of the task, providing both detailed instructions for pet care and household duties.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and considerate, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
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