Many people leave their home country and go to other countries to live and work. Why is this happening? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays, living and working in a different
country
from their mother's land become more popular especially in
the
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third
world countries.
This
essay will demonstrate
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reasons
seasons
teasons
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, benefits and drawbacks related to
this
matter. The standard of health, comfort and happiness in developing countries is
under ground
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level . In
developing
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country
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countries
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, the government cannot provide enough sufficient fundamental needs for their
people
.
Therefore
, they have to do whatever they can to escape
this
terrible situation. Leaving their home
country
and starting their new
life
abroad is the only solution.
However
, living overseas,
people
need to spend a huge amount of
money
. The cost of living abroad tends to be more costly.
For example
, residents in America have to pay taxation fees twice as much as those living in
hometown
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,Thailand. So, achieving happiness requires more
money
than they think.
In
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contrary
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, settlement in the
first
or the
second
country
is an enormous opportunity for having a better
life
.
Firstly
,
people
can easily find a job which can pay them the highest salary. Spending
same
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length of time on working but receiving more
money
can be possible only in
this
country
.
Therefore
, the road to
become
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a billionaire is in hand.
Secondly
, living in
different
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a different
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country
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countries
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can guarantee
that essential requirements
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are provided by
government
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the government
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even if they are foreigners. To illustrate, when all over the world facing with COVID-19 pandemic outbreak, South Korea's government make sure that whoever lives in
this
country
has a chance to get vaccinated.
Last
but not least, starting
life
overseas,
people
will have more connections. They are going to know several
of
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international friends and colleagues
which
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can help them in the future. In conclusion, even though leaving their hometown in order to work or live in
different
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country
cost a lot of
money
but it is worth
for
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spending it because
this
can give more advantages than disadvantages. Personally, I recommend
people
to settle their new
life
abroad.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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