Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
luxurious world, the
buildings
are designed in a way to fulfil every architectural and practical aspect. It is argued that while planning the design, the functionality of a building should be prioritized. I partially agree with the statement and think that both aspects/factors are equally important.
This
essay will substantiate my view. Ensuring the proper function in a building will contribute towards comfort and security. People who are going to stay in the building look for basic facilities.
For
example
, having easily accessible emergency exits and properly designed elevators provide extra safety and convenience respectively.
Moreover
, different
buildings
have different purposes and require to be layout according to the motive.
For
example
, The setup of the hospital is entirely different from that restaurant as it includes laboratories and other technicians are constructed in the hospitals rather than a restaurant because it serves the purpose of a hospital.
However
, outlooks of premises should be taken into consideration as it attracts people. Even though there are many other factors but the
first
thing that makes a visitor
to
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visit the building is its physical appearance. Tourists are fascinated by the more beautiful
buildings
.
For
example
, the Taj Mahal.
Besides
, an impressive look increases the commercial value of the property. It is evident that people are willing to pay more for aesthetic ambience.
For
example
, a recent survey has shown that structures with pleasing outer looks are sold at higher prices and holds more value in the merchandise world. In conclusion, I believe that both features and the appealing/enduring appearance of a building should be considered equally when designing a building that provides us with consolation and security, to satisfy the needs at the same time aesthetic
buildings
ENHANCE their value in trading and tourism.
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