some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothe and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individual s who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether
children
are allowed to make their own
decisions
would make them arrogant and selfish or it is significant about matters that influence them. I would lean towards the latter as I believe that
children
can benefit from making
choices
. On the one hand, it is argued that
children
's freedom in making
decision
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can affect their lives adversely.
Firstly
, when
children
are free to make
decisions
, they may assume that they are mature enough to be allowed to perform independently and
all
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that all
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their
choices
are true. Whenever these
children
encounter the detrimental implications of their
choices
, they blame others and know them responsible for those impacts.
Therefore
, they will become spoilt and selfish.
Secondly
, these individuals will suffer from difficulties in their personal and professional lives in the future
due to
they always give the right to themselves and
not
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are not
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open to criticism and opposing views.
On the other hand
, there are several benefits for youngsters in learning how to make
decisions
. One of the main advantages is that they can make difficult
decisions
in their adult lives.
this
question arises
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how they can learn
this
skill. By way of example, Parents should teach their
children
in
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at
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their
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early
ages
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age
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to choose between two items and ask them about the reasons and the effect of their decision on themselves and
people
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the people
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around them.
Thus
, independence, critical- thinking, and confidence would
foster
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in them.
Also
, making mistakes in
choices
causes youngsters to learn from them so they would avoid making wrong
decisions
. In conclusion, In my point of view,
children
need to be given enough freedom to learn important skills which will be essential for their future.
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