Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
luxurious world, the buildings
are designed in a way to fulfill
every architectural and practical Change the spelling
fulfil
aspects
. It is argued that while planning the design, the functionality of a building should be prioritized. I partially agree Change to a singular noun
aspect
to
the statement and think that both aspects/factors are equally important. Change preposition
with
This
essay will substantiate my view.
Ensuring the proper function in a building will contribute towards comfort and security. People who are going stay
in the building look for basic facilities. Fix the infinitive
to stay
For
example
, having easily accessible emergency exits and properly designed elevators provide extra safety and convenience respectively. Moreover
, different buildings
have different purposes and require to be layout according to the motive. For
example
, A setup of hospital
is entirely different Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
than
that Change the preposition
from
restaurants
as it Fix the agreement mistake
restaurant
include
laboratories and other technicians are constructed in the hospitals rather than a restaurant because it serves the purpose of a hospital.
Change the verb form
includes
However
, outlooks of premises should be taken into consideration as it attracts people. Even though there are many other factors but the first
thing that makes a visitor to
visit the building is its physical appearance. Tourists are fascinated Change the verb form
apply
towards
the more beautiful Change preposition
by
buildings
. For
example
, Taj
Mahal. Correct article usage
the Taj
Besides
, impressive
look increases the commercial value of the property. It is evident that people are willing to pay more for aesthetic ambience. Correct article usage
an impressive
For
example
, a recent survey has shown that structures with pleasing outer looks are sold at higher prices and holds more value in merchandise
world.
In conclusion, I believe that both features and Correct article usage
the merchandise
appealing
/enduring appearance of a building should be considered equally when designing a building Correct article usage
the appealing
provide
us with consolation and security, to satisfy the needs at the same time aesthetic Change the verb form
provides
buildings
ENHANCE its
value in trading and tourism.Correct pronoun usage
their
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite