some say that because many people are living much longer , the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably . to what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, some
people
argue , the life expectancy of many individuals is higher . So their retirement maturity from their job should Use synonyms
also
be increased . According to my opinion , I think that the Linking Words
people
's age at which they retire from work should not be raised , I totally disagree with their argument
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First
and foremost , humans after a certain age should not be able to work effectively . To illustrate , when a person gets old , its efficiency to do a job has been decreased and the younger population will be more effective in doing that jobs as compare to older ones . Linking Words
In addition
, it leads to unemployment . Linking Words
For instance
, even though if the old man get to retire from their job , many seats are free for toddlers to join but if they do not retire , youngsters will not be able to get any post .
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However
, nobody can beat the experience of oldsters . Linking Words
An elder
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Elder
people
should have the opportunity to spend time with their family . To demonstrate , Use synonyms
nevertheless
, a person do hard work in most of their life and do not have enough time to spend with their love ones , they should have right , when they get older Linking Words
then
they can be at home with family members . Linking Words
Moreover
, they should have a chance to enjoy and collect good vibes in their heart . As they are totally indulged in their trial for whole day and night , they are tensed about their responsibilities , they have occasion to visit their friends and relatives and to be free from all responsibilities and tensions .
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although
oldsters are not able to task in a perfect way as they did when they were young , they have some point in their growth to spend with their loved ones . I totally disagree with the Linking Words
people
's opinion who thought that the youth of retirement should be increased .Use synonyms
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