In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

It has been observed that the responsibilities of man and

woman

in the family and skeletal of

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are being changed in present times. Living in

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family and preferences

to

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women are the changes occur in recent times;

however

, I feel that

this

modification has brought positive

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. Many families are nowadays living as a nuclear family.

This

is because in the past a big family could run happily with just

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earner of family

members

such

as father but now owing to inflation on basic necessities

such

as rising in the prices living expenses, it is very arduous for

single earner

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to operate

whole

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family;

therefore

,

old

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person of the family is being sent to old age home or villages in order to run a small family.

In addition

to

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family, family

members

can be seen giving more

priorities

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to the

woman

career. Since globalization occurs, a

woman

can do work not only nationally but

also

globally which was not allowed in the past.

Besides

, women are neither forced for doing only household chores nor sit at home, they can either do

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or study overseas.

As a result

, in the recent

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woman

are given more priorities than men which are

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biggest change.

This

development brings more

advantage

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advantages

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to the family

members

. Due to the high living expenses, if both

woman

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women

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and

man

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men

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can earn, they would not face any kind of financial barriers

such

as education fees of their child or expense of medicals.

Consequently

, they would not feel any health problems

such

as anxiety or depression which is mainly caused by

burden

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the burden

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of outstanding.

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health reports of US academy claims that majority of both earners in the families live more healthy and happy than those families which

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single earner. In conclusion, small family and preference to the women are the modification happened in recent years which bring more benefits to the family

members

to live

healthy

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and happily.