It has been observed that the responsibilities of man and
woman
in the family and skeletal of
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are being changed in present times. Living in
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family and preferences
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women are the changes occur in recent times;
however
, I feel that
this
modification has brought positive
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.
Many families are nowadays living as a nuclear family.
This
is because in the past a big family could run happily with just
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earner of family
members
such
as father but now owing to inflation on basic necessities
such
as rising in the prices living expenses, it is very arduous for
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to operate
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family;
therefore
,
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person of the family is being sent to old age home or villages in order to run a small family.
In addition
to
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family, family
members
can be seen giving more
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to the
woman
career. Since globalization occurs, a
woman
can do work not only nationally but
also
globally which was not allowed in the past.
Besides
, women are neither forced for doing only household chores nor sit at home, they can either do
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or study overseas.
As a result
, in the recent
woman
are given more priorities than men which are
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biggest change.
This
development brings more
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to the family
members
. Due to the high living expenses, if both
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can earn, they would not face any kind of financial barriers
such
as education fees of their child or expense of medicals.
Consequently
, they would not feel any health problems
such
as anxiety or depression which is mainly caused by
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of outstanding.
For example
,
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health reports of US academy claims that majority of both earners in the families live more healthy and happy than those families which
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single earner.
In conclusion, small family and preference to the women are the modification happened in recent years which bring more benefits to the family
members
to live
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and happily.