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Some people believe that a lot of research is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that scientific investigation has been playing a significant role in today’s world.
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, some individuals reckon that it is merely a wastage of our precious resources
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 time and
money
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.  I partially agree with the viewpoint. On the one hand, there are enormous advantages of experimental
research
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. The
first
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 and foremost is that  the
research
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 has brought many unprecedented changes for the welfare of humankind. There were many fatal diseases with which
people
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 were dying at an alarming rate. But, with the accurate results of scientific testing, treatment of
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 diseases could be possible and
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, these are proved to be a boon for society.
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, the recent attack of the covid-19 virus has taken away a million
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people
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’s lives.
People
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 all over the world are now able to fight against the pandemic only due to the medicines
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 as Pfizer, Covishield, Covaxine. The medicines are, undoubtedly, the result of experiments.
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, the
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 has helped to increase the fertility of the soil which in turn has revolutionised
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agriculture productivity.
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, it is irrefutable to say that scientific
research
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 is a waste of time and
money
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.
On the other hand
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, false outcomes of experimental analysis insist
people
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 believe that it is a waste of
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 as well as time. Sometimes after long
research
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, which involves a team of scientists and various expensive science  equipment, results are proved to be wrong. It causes
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 as well as government to regret it as the
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 could be spent on other severe social issues
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 as environmental problems. To conclude, I strongly believe that
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 scientific
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 may have produced some wrong outcomes, it is still an inseparable part of life. It has immense participation in the growth of the universe.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • long-term benefits
  • advancements
  • unpredictable outcomes
  • high-risk field
  • significant breakthroughs
  • immediate benefit
  • financial drain
  • mismanaged funds
  • limited practical applications
  • public opinion
  • tangible results
  • spectacular successes
  • ethics
  • moral justification
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