The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens' health rather than on protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

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whether to finance for medical

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or environmental protection. In my point of view, while

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idea is valid to some certain extent, it is optimal to balance both factors. It can not be denied that the

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should be used to fund medical

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certain reasons. Evidently, there are many unprecedented pandemics that pose a strong threat to human health.

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, the current world’s situation is facing

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the Covid-19 pandemic, which disease kill millions of residents

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all over the world.

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virus exacerbates directly to the human’s lung as well as lead people to die immediately.

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illness does not have special medicine to treat. Due to that, the

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for new medication is a significant concern that truly needs the supporting from the

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.

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, authorities should use their

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for developing medical

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. While the redeeming features of funding for medical

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are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if the money supporting

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environmental protection is ignored. Currently, the deterioration of environmental quality is an alarming issue caused by human’s activities

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as the toxic substances in wastewater.

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, a few years ago, the Formosa company in Ha Tinh, Viet Nam charged straightly their untreated wastewater to the ocean and damaged the marine ecology system.

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, the

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have to reduce the deterioration of environmental quality by financing these company to treat their environmental problems. To sum up, both aspects need the support of the

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.

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, authorities have to balance these factors to avoid the

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's deficit.