We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets . Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

With the pace of 21st-century technology is lept to the level which was unimaginable a few decades ago . Due to the
advancement
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we all
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to believe that there is
life
existence
on other planets .
Although
I am
also
one of them who argue that there is
existence
on the other globe , there are many ways to prove that there are creatures out of the globe .
Nevertheless
, there
are
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much evidence provided by our scientists , there is
existence
on another planet.
For instance
, as our scientists went to the moon for their research , they find a footprint of any creature they took a picture and sample of that to the earth .
Moreover
, even though after much research on the planets , they took more steps towards the success of their goal . There are many points to give proof that aliens
life
exists.
First
and foremost , By doing more and more researches . To illustrate , if the researchers do many and more researches like they check the oxygen , gravity and so on , they will
able
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to prove that
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is the
existence
on another planet .
In addition
, make
the
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suitable devices .
For example
, in spite of doing research , the equipment should be suitable and more effective , the outcome can be more strong and effective . In conclusion , even though by the proofs given by researchers we
comes
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to know that
their
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is
life
out of the earth ,
it
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they find more they will be able to give a strong point regarding
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this
. I totally believe that there is
life
on another plan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vastness
  • statistical probability
  • habitable planets
  • Drake Equation
  • extremophiles
  • hydrothermal vents
  • monumental
  • resilience
  • adaptability
  • philosophical
  • human-centric viewpoints
  • interstellar
  • cosmos
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