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of mobile phones always is not a good habit. same time other thinking

kids

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using

mobiles is

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beneficial

to the

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agreed that

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using

unnecessary

phone

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is not good.

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will elaborate in

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essay. some individuals unnecessary

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using

the mobile

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for the

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.

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because

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using

to much mobile

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kids

can get in

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depression

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the health of the

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. illustrate recently in

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child

jump from the building while watching some

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dangerous

game in the mobile .

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much

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the

phone

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cause

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of eyes weakness and

headach

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headache

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are

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using

suing

mobile phones to watch adults movie which

effect

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their

brain

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very badly. some

child

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children

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are

aducted

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the mobile overnight which is really

harmfull

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harmful

for their health and their

mind

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growth.

usuing

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using

mobile for social media

also

teaneagers

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teenagers

are

usuing

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using

in their friends. which is wasting their time and they are not concentrating

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study.

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,

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phone

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phones

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by some

child

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children

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for their learning purpose

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which is giving a good result to them in their exams.

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using

mobile

phone

to get the map when you

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is very important.

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kids

are not

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using

their mobile for

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good purpose. in

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strongly agreed that the mobile

phone

is not a good habit

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usu

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use

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for the

child

and

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.

however

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there is a

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positive

side

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phone

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kids

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mobile

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phones

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to use

wrong

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things.