Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
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educational institutions nowadays. The main reason behind Correct article usage
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this
is family violence. In, the forthcoming essay, I will explain some reason
and solutions regarding bullying.
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reasons
To begin
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predominant
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parents
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parent's
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footprint
negative
impact on children thinking process. They start to think doing oppress is Add an article
a negative
only
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a superior
person
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people
For example
, most of the teenagers who involve in intimidate crime , they
have harsh childhood.
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However
, on the other hand
, the people who are persecute
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are persecuted
that
leads them toward Correct pronoun usage
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the
depression or obesity and Correct article usage
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also
tend to attempt suicide. Hence
, in the
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of teen
case
were registered because of bullying. To control Fix the agreement mistake
cases
this
problem
, firstly
, the government should launch awareness
campaign Add an article
an awareness
in
social media and in school. Change preposition
on
Secondly
, the school authorities need to close observation on students activities. Last
but not the list, the start should start free
concealing program which helps young people Correct article usage
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recover Change preposition
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for
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from
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mental problem
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the rate Add a comma
,China
or
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of
oppress
is zero due to free mental health services.
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oppression
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spread like a disease and juveniles are effect most. Only Replace the word
intimidation
good
parenting and with the help of Change preposition
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the state
this
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be stopped
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