POPULAR EVENTS LIKE THE FOOTBALL WORLD CUP AND OTHER INTERNATIONAL SPORTING OCCASSIONS ARE ESSENTIAL IN ERASING INTERNATIONAL TENSIONS AND REALISING PATRIOTIC EMOTIONS IN A SAFEST WAY/ TO WHAT EXTEND YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION

There is no doubt that

sports

events

like

football

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world cup, Cricket world cup and

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games and all providing a platform to build up

the

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unity between the

countries

and

also

initiate

patriotic

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a patriotic

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feel to everyone.

On the contrary

, these occasions sometimes create tension amongst the

countries

.

This

essay will discuss

this

topic in detail.

Firstly

, I agree with the point that, conducting

sports

and games in international ways will be provoking the individuals to be

a

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nationally responsible person.

Moreover

, through these

events

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people are getting chances to show their love and support to their

nation

.

Moreover

, the winners will get appreciation and attention from all over the world and

this

brings pride to their

nation

. Along with that, the whole country celebrates the victory as their own. In fact, all these moments makes people

to

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enjoy the patriotic feel to the highest level in the safest way.

Secondly

,

although

these occasions provide possibilities to have a good bond between the

countries

,

this

also

may create issues among the nations because of participants or

athletes

.

This

may

happens

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because of

short tempered

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athletes

or participants due to the use of any drugs.

For example

,

few

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a few

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years back few

athletes

from a well-known country got punished for using illegal drugs during competition.

In addition

, they use these kinds of drugs for increasing their stamina

although

; they know that

this

is unethical.

Therefore

, these issues create a negative impact on the

nation

they represent and

also

,

this

may create problems between the participating

countries

. Due to

this

, the above-mentioned

behavior

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from

athletes

can be avoided by providing proper

counseling

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counselling

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to the participants and

also

they should train well about the way of

behavior

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behaviour

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. Apart from the mentioned issue, it is clear that conducting

sports

events

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in

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international

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the international

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level may help to

erase

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ease

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tension between the

countries

. To conclude, having international

sports

events

build up strong patriotic emotions and

brings

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bring

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pride to

nation

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the nation

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.

Moreover

, these

also

help to reduce tension among

countries

if the

athletes

are trained to behave well.