In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Effortless mode of transportation has always been a preferred choice for humans to reach  their destination. In some countries,

however

, some people choose to travel in fast trains and argue to spend large sum of money on constructing new

railway

lines

,

although

, some argue to spend money on improving old existing public

transports

. In

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we will examine both

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views respectively and provide a personal conclusion later. On one hand, constructing new

railway

lines

might provide passengers

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swift way to travel.

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plenty of

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and travel remote cities back and forth, and on top of that consume half of their day in travelling,

consequently

, constructing new

railway

lines

and providing and them with sophisticated technologies of quick travelling might diminish their long travelling hours and award them to reach home early and spend the rest of the evening with their family,

this

change would make their transporting matter quite moderate and vigorous.

On the other hand

, some people ought to believe that their funds should

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improving public

transports

such

as

buses

. It might be true because numerous cities still use old public

transports

but are not comparatively well maintained and provide a scanty amount of repairing to accommodate citizen’s activities again.

For example

, developing countries still use old busways for intercity travelling,

thus

these

buses

are rusty and need repairing to some extent but these

buses

might need repairing again after travelling few miles, which may develop a need of repairing several times, resulting in an elevating cost equivalent to the price of a whole brand new bus. To conclude, new

railway

lines

may give some people the opportunity to save a considerable amount of time,

in addition

, may save from the heavy traffic caused on roads via

buses

and cars.

On the contrary

, investing

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preexisting public

transports

would never support

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modern transportation life. In my opinion, public money should

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on constructing new

railway

lines

for more preferable and convenient

transports

according to recent situations and fast-track life.