Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter, Describe the situation Explain the problem it is causing you Offer at least one solution.

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Dear Mr Robert I am writing
this
letter on the connection of my neighbour in the
next
room. I am living on the sixth floor of your building unit in room 606 and I am deeply disappointed and feel irritated by his loud music late at night. Let me explain my situation I cannot sleep properly because he is playing music too loud in the late evening at
first
it looks seems fine for me during the afternoon on non-working days but later on he still playing loudly until at the middle of the night which I disturbed in my sleeping time. Since I have work in the
next
morning it affects my performance in the office. Could you kindly impose a rule for no noisy policy until 10 in the evening onwards and whoever not following these rules he/she would pay fines and will do community service? I would appreciate it if you could look into
this
matter at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Allan Austin
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