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Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development,however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

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 depending on the
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financial
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 communication skills. I disagree with that statement . Because
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the changes in countrys` economic help humen to be widely interactive with
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surrounding
 environment and rich countries
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 from their economic improvement to boost peoples`
life
.I
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strongly
beleive
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believe
 that
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 of wave development outweigh the drawbacks.
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, economic enhance is intensively
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helpful
 for
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a citizen
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citizen
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 to become closer and have strong
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relationship
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amongst
others
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. You know that
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natians
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nations
 has
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a high
high
 level of technologies which help
people
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easiest
 way of communication by using phones or computer or even speak directly face to face . A good example of mine friend who
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 in Turkey , one day she told me that her phone daily news which read every day make every
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 across known by everyone ,so when they get in
such
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terrible
 they communicate with each other to solve the problem.
Secondly
, what occurs in
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 with changes or
such
 improvement reflects on peoples
life
. persons` situation can change 90% if
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roads
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for example
 alter to be more modern and attractive. We can see that drivers
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 to
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entertain
 when they are on the way
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 their
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job
 because of the decoration of the
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track
tracks
 which make them
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enjoyable
.
For example
 , what happen in
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Europe
last
 year when they opened the new roads for the workers
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only
 to
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enhance
 them to attend in time and have a good mood out of the traffic jams
such
 sequences make them do much more better in their jobs. In conclusion,
people
 thinkings
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different
 some of them encourage industrial
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improvement
 While others say it has
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drawback
drawbacks
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 in less social interaction. I
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truly
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disagree
 with that statement. With technologies
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 we reach almost
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every
 countries news . We
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now
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know
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 each other well by using phone or having
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discussion.
Also
,
develop
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 countries could help
people
 to find
less
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 difficulties in their
life
 . The benefits of improving economics
is
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outweight
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outweigh
outweighed
 the negatives.
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