Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development,however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of the countries
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’s quality of life
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on those nations financial progress. While, some individuals believe that, due to the growth of providence society lose
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moral values and
also
increases discrimination. In , the forthcoming essay, I will explain some positive and negative aspects and
also
give my own point of view.
To begin
with, economic ameliorate play a significant role for a nation but
also
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a
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human life. The
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predominant reason is that, boosting up providence assists to come out from
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cycle. Because of
this
,
people
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amount of money unlike
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past as well as they lead a quality full life with
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of improvements.
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decades ago, Bangladesh
considered
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poor
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country, in
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time, Bangladesh is now
developing
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nation
thus
,
this
country shows steady improvement in
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.
As a result
, the unemployment rate is going low and
also
the liquidity of money on
people
hand
also
rise.
However
,
on the other hand
, Every
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have two sides. Those
people
who argued with
this
notion,
therefore
, in the developed countries the gap between poor and rich is going wide. For that reason, those
people
who belong to
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community,
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are becoming self-
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and do not feel the pain of lower folks.
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economy forum run a survey and reported that
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nowadays
people
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social values and moralities because
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,they hold the power of money. To conclude, in my opinion, financial boost is important for
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being it is improving our situation and
also
provide lots of services. And I
also
think, the advantages effects are more than its drawbacks , our
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system can solve those problems .
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