Some people think that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think that other factors such as television, friend, music have the biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Opinions are divided on whether the family should be the primary influence on a

child

's development or those external factors

such

as television, friends and music play the key role. Personally, I am inclined to support the former perspective. On the one hand, children nowadays at a certain age will be exposed to the Internet and many electronic devices.

For instance

, TV shows are shaping the behaviour of children as they tend to mimic what they have watched on the big screen.

In addition

to that, music can be taught at an early age at school to make a significant impact on kids' moods and feelings.

However

, there is a drawback that people left out of

this

side

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are the bad effects those external sources may cause to their kids,

as well as

there is no proper way to control those effects.

On the other hand

, talking about family, there are multiple values we can influence on our

child

from a very early stage of life. It is a fact that kids have a special bond with their

parents

from the newborn stage, and

this

bond develops during the grow-up period of the kid eventually.

Moreover

,

parents

can teach their children many essential lessons, from mother tongue language to moral behaviours in society.

As a result

, good

parents

caring can nurture a good behaviour

child

. In conclusion, there is no doubt that the reasons appear valid on both sides, yet my opinion leans toward the necessity of

parents

to affect

child

development. As raising a kid is an obligation of the

parents

, we should raise our awareness on

this

matter in any public society.