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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The majority problem of dwell in overseas where have to interact with a foreigner is the language barrier.
This
 trouble is probably the principle of social issues including trouble in real life. In my perspective, I completely agree with
this
 statement,
this
 essay pointed out communication with a foreign language and living abroad.
To begin
 with, most
people
 are encountering in speaking with a native speaker.
Similarly
, when
people
 do not understand, so they cannot dispute with strangers persons clearly and ambiguous.
For example
, most citizens in Germany speak the traditional words, so tourists who would like to go there should communicate a little in their speech as well as we will conceive a piece of correct information to prevent misunderstanding during
traveling
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.
Therefore
, not being familiar with other sounds and languages has disadvantages in receiving and sending the words from one to another one including may incur a major issue with different countries.
Furthermore
, someone who away from the homeland is confronting with various lifestyles. Since there is cultural diversity in society due to come from a different area
such
 as standard living, religions, and traditions.
For instance
, in England,
people
 have a
favorite
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 beverage
that is
 tea and they have a culture of drinking tea with dessert while the Thai population
favors
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 coffee more than tea because they believe that it can urge their body in working all day.
Hence
,
people
 who move to a foreign country must adapt to a new environment and should have an institute in motivation them to occupy there. In conclusion, inhabit in a foreign nation leads to change massively in inhabitants to struggle with the varying situation. In my opinion,
this
 is a normal case for everyone in the
first
 year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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