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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The majority problem of dwell in
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oversea
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 where must interact with a foreigner is a language barrier.
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. In my perspective, I totally agree
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 statement,
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communication with a foreign language and existence
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abroad.
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people
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, when
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 do not understand, so they cannot dispute with
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 persons clearly and ambiguous.
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, most citizens in Germany speaks the traditional words, so tourists who would like to go there should communicate a little in their speech as well as we will conceive
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 to prevent misunderstanding during travelling.
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, having not familiar
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 sounds and languages have disadvantages in receiving and sending the words from one to another one including may incur a major issue with different countries.
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, someone who away from
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 is confronting
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 various
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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. Since there
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culture
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 diversity in
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 due to come from a different area
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 as standard living, religions and traditions.
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, in England,
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 beverage
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 tea and they have a culture in drinking tea with dessert while
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coffee more than tea because they believe that it can urge their body in working all day.
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,
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 who move to a foreign country must adapt to a new environment and should have
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 institute in motivation them to occupy there. In conclusion, inhabit in a foreign nation leads to change massively in inhabitants to struggle with
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situation
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. In my opinion,
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 year.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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