Some people think that with combined effort on the part of the government and society crime can be completely eradicated, while others argue that this is completely hypothetical, and that crime has always been present in societies even in an ancient time. Discuss these two views. Which one do you agree with?

In recent years, the issue related to committing

crime

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has attracted the public’s attention. Some experts believe that a wide range of criminals

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controlled by state laws and regulations, while others

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that it is impossible to eliminate offensiveness in societies.

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essay will examine both views of

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controversy and the personal opinion in favour will be given. As for the

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aspect, it is undeniable that poverty is the potential factor leading people to commit a

crime

. What

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means is that individuals belonging to low-income, jobless and uneducated groups are more likely to violate the

law

.

Thus

, the government need to thoroughly provide education and professional skills matching with employment and labour demand in

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market.

In addition

, the public can implement a collaborative attempt.

For example

, the measure namely “Community Watch” – a

crime

prevention program – involves

citizen

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working with each other and with

law

enforcement agencies to mitigate

crime

and victimization in their communities.

As a result

, life security and the landscape of personally residential property could be

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prevented from criminals. Regarding the

second

viewpoint, transgression could not be totally obliterated, despite having established laws for the control of habitual criminals in several countries. It is common to believe that insufficient enforcement of

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is the vital variable of re-offended behaviour.

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, turning to undisputed answer, whether the public can assure about justice

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if police officer

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an offender because of corruption in

police

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the police

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community.

For instance

, Thailand – one of the countries having

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corruptions

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corruption

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index in the world – is a place in which all

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of

felony

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felonies

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can be legal by providing a huge amount of

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to officers. In conclusion, from my perspective, I completely agree with the latter perspective as

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of fact that

crime

still exists in every community, but there are potential ways to tackle

such

matters, or at least minimise the effects.

Consequently

, the

law

ministry must implement a harsh punishment and have an independent institute scrutinizing frauds and

corruptions

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corruption

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in police sectors.