In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend

Recently, the purpose of shopping changes from a routine domestic task to a

hobby

. It is widely accepted that

this

offers many benefits.

However

, shopping as a

hobby

can

also

have many drawbacks.

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essay will consider the benefit of

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shopping as a

hobby

and the negative effects that could occur. The

first

and most obvious benefit of shopping as a

hobby

is

a

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decreasing stress. Nowadays

people

get more stress due to the hectic city,

,

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consequently

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the easiest way to make

people

satisfied is spending

money

with the thing they love

such

as food, a fashion or an electronic gadget in

everyday

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.

Therefore

, shopping tends to become

as

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one

kind of

hobby

that everyday

people

will spend

money

with their

friend

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friends

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and family.

Moreover

, the changing purpose of shopping to

hobby

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can strengthen the family bond because shopping will not

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a

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responsibility for the mother who looks after the house but it will be the

time

that family can help each other. Despite many benefits, shopping

also

has numerous drawbacks. The possible

one

is overspending the

money

. If

people

think of shopping as a

hobby

, they will use

money

less effective.

For example

, fashion shopping is often changing trend

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every month, so it has to use numerous

money

for following fashion trends. As the result, they will not have

sparing

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to spare

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money

for

using

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in the emergency case.

In addition

, shopping for entertainment is

one

of the

time consuming

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activities. It will take more

time

than a routine domestic task because they will enjoy shopping which the

time

flies. In conclusion, many

people

use their leisure

time

for shopping as

one

of their hobbies. Spending

money

on the things that they love could reduce the stress,

however

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overspending could occur less saving. So

people

have to learn how to manage their

money

and balance the

money

for the

hobby

and the future life.