Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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With the rapid increase in
world
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population, the impact of human activities has greatly influenced bio-diversity and
earth's
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the earth's
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eco system
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ecosystem
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. Humans have played a pivotal role in
gradual
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the gradual
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extinction of various
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we will discuss how
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of plastics, excessive release of industrial
waste
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and poaching of animal skin for manufacturing various
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have been contributing enormously
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affecting
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fauna and will suggest some solutions to
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problem.
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, we have a decade long history of using plastics as a means to carry and pack
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. It being a non-degradable product, and tones of plastic drowned into the oceans each year
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unrepairable
of
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damage to the underwater
species
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.
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, poaching and hunting of various wildlife
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also
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prominently vanished a huge number of
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from the
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.
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,
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tiger is classified as endangered
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in most
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countries and its numbers are declining on a constant basis.
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, governments should adopt schemes wherein industries are prohibited to use plastics and are encouraged to use
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products
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by way of tax benefits on
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products
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.
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, stringent laws and punishments should be enforced for poachers and hunters in case of any
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activity.
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, industrial
waste
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has been another reason for
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the decline
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in
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world's
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the world's
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bio diversity
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biodiversity
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. The release of toxic substances as part of industrial production in the oceans has been a huge factor in deteriorating flora and fauna.
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, many bird
species
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have been extinct and few
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the verge of disappearing. Industries should adopt production methods so that industrial
waste
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can be recycled and be useful in creating a better
world
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ecosystem.
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- research and development projects should be encouraged wherein new ways of recycling various industrial
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are being created. In conclusion, it is the responsibility to save the planet and
it's
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its
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eco-system
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ecosystem
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lies upon both industries and government. Taking necessary steps and precautions will be the
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step towards building a better
world
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for all
species
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on
this
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beautiful planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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