Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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life with all the amenities than ever before due to western influences. Some think that people accept

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unpleasant

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while others believe that the public should be improved these kinds of situations. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion for the following reasons.

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with, people should be accepted to their's

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when they are feeling

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his work, he cannot quit because he has

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of commitments so he would accept that circumstance and lack of money is not a big issue, how we are living with happiness is

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a matter than anything. Taking Indians

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and shortage of capital in

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, even though, they accept

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their

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happily and healthily compared to wealthy folks.

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with

poverty

does not our problems but will death time

also

has

poverty

is a huge mistake of everyone,

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means, everybody has a rights to improve to their's bad position in various way

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instance, they have been developing to their's

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by their

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hard-work

and experience, not only improves the government but

also

the population too

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, many top companies production buildings are available there like Samsung and etc. Obviously, the public should be tried to improving to their's

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level. To conclude, everyone likes to live a wealthy

lifestyle

. some

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to their position and do not try to

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level, others always try to become a rich person among the society. In my opinion, about

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, the population should be tried to improve to their's underprivilege situation,

this

can leads to living a better

lifestyle

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