Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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modern
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would
like to live a
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life with all the amenities than ever before due to western influences. Some think that people accept
thier's
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there's
unplesent
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unpleasant
positions
such
as lack of job satisfaction and
poverty
while others believe that the public should be improved these kinds of situations. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion for the following reasons.
To begin
with, people should be accepted to their's
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unpleasant
circumstance because
this
position never
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when they are feeling
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about
this
.
In other words
, if a person
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not
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like
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to
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his work, he cannot quit because he has
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of commitments so he would accept that circumstance and lack of money is not a big issue, how we are living with happiness is
this
a matter than anything. Taking Indians
for example
, countless folks face
unsatisfaction
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about
job
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jobs
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and shortage of capital in
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, even though, they accept
to
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their
lifestyle
and live
with
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happily and healthily compared to wealthy folks.
Conversely
,
born
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with
poverty
does not our problems but will death time
also
has
poverty
is a huge mistake of everyone,
this
means, everybody has a rights to improve to their's bad position in various way
such
as
hardwork
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hard work
. Taking China
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instance, they have been developing to their's
poverty
by their
hardwork
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hard work
hard-work
and experience, not only improves the government but
also
the population too
thus
, many top companies production buildings are available there like Samsung and etc. Obviously, the public should be tried to improving to their's
lifestyle
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level. To conclude, everyone likes to live a wealthy
lifestyle
. some
accepts
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to their position and do not try to
improving
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next
level, others always try to become a rich person among the society. In my opinion, about
this
, the population should be tried to improve to their's underprivilege situation,
this
can leads to living a better
lifestyle
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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