Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste others think that industries are the ones causing pollution.discuss both views and give your opinion.
Pollution is one of the factors that affecting our generation nowadays,
however
, some people believes
that it Change the verb form
believe
caused
by the modernized way of living Add a missing verb
is caused
such
as technologies like automobiles. In
what extent it is true? In Change preposition
To
this
essay, I will discuss why it is debatable to the
society and why I am agreeing Correct article usage
apply
to
Change preposition
with
this
issue.
To begin
with, on the positive view, the
transportation is very important in our daily living. It is helping us, in a way that it is accessible to the public to go Correct article usage
apply
in
Change preposition
to
different
Add an article
the different
a different
destination
in Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
such
period of time. Examples are trains, planes, boats and cars. Every generations
Change to a singular noun
generation
,
are witnessed how fast these inventions are upgrading, they made Remove the comma
apply
it
convenient, stylish, and modern. Though the prices Correct pronoun usage
them
are
Change the verb form
are also compromised
are also compromising
also
compromise, it is not the reason why people are still buying it, which shows the increased number of the demands, thus
companies are doubling their production.
Furthermore
, some individuals are concern on
how it affects the environment, chemicals and other harmful products are Change preposition
about
use
to build and maintain the life of a car. It needs fuel or gasoline to make it work, Change the form of the verb
used
that
produces smoke which causes pollution. Because of these transportations, Correct pronoun usage
which
environment
is already Add an article
the environment
indangered
, just by observing it, there are more buildings, infrastructures and high way created to use Correct your spelling
endangered
this technologies
than green nature.
In conclusion, Change the determiner
this technology
these technologies
new
generation offering us the modern and upgraded kind of environment, where we can access and afford these things. Correct article usage
the new
However
, the negative effects
of it Fix the agreement mistake
effect
is
compromising our surroundings by destroying and polluting Change the verb form
are
it
. In the near future, it is possible that Correct pronoun usage
them
next
generation, Correct article usage
the next
they
cannot experience anymore the natural and fresh air. So we need to consider our children's future by preserving and cleaning our surroundings.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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