Some people think exposure to modern technology at an earlier age is good for children, while others claim that it is harmful to their development. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, a new innovation has become

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integral part of everybody

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. There are some people who believe that

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modern devices have a good impact on young children

life

, whereas, there are others argue that, it has negative progress in their

life

. In , the forthcoming passage, I will try to explain both sides of an argument and

also

give my point of view.

To begin

with, there are those people who favour

this

notion because the submission to the gadgets enlarges learning progress. With the use of , computers , smartphones, Apple TV, i- pod is now incorporated into the educational lessons and

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boost up interest, and help to engaged students with the study.

Moreover

, the students

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doing multimedia projects which enhance their skills.

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, the world Education Form run a survey and reported that

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over 70% of students learning and practical skills are increased.

As a result

, their creativity level increased in the early stage of

life

and

also

helpful for their near future

life

.

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on the other hand

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subjection towards automation machines has a disadvantage because

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it makes the young generation lazier and

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develop several contagious diseases. Nowadays, teenagers engaged most of their time on the screen .

As a result

, they start to dislike physical tasks . For that reason, they are now less active comparing to the past people.

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, the world health organisation say that

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50% of the teen were effective by obesity and depression ,

therefore

, their obsession on new technology. To conclude, in my perception, it is an undeniable truth, the usefulness of modern machinery in our

life

is unimaginable.

Moreover

, we just need to be a little cautious about using

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those facilities.