Parents whose offspring are criminals should also be punished. How far do you agree?

Nowadays it seems normal to have criminal youngsters. The main cause can be having

bad

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society and

friends

. Because

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many

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people can be surrounded by(with) bad

friends

. It is easy to get a person with awful

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while you have crummy

friends

. How ewer upbringing of parents is more important. Since guardians

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more responsibility than

environment

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. Concurrently, offspring should be punished by reason

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that they

are takes

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care

of their children. Particularly, I support the idea that wellspring should be disciplined by

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to have more safe country to live in.

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essay is going to explain my opinion with supportive explanations and provide examples where needed. (у вас списала чуть чуть поменяла ). Notably, I allow

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dismiss because it is very important for the future of all citizens.

Firstly

, parents have to take

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their adults. They have to educate their children

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good manners. Minor can not understand what is wrong and true .The best educators for

infant

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an infant

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is their ancestor. But nowadays parents do not

care

about their child. They

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busy with not important concepts. Guardians

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that earning money, being a rich person

more

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important than rearing offspring. While folks are busy with their affairs, children are becoming as a criminal. As an

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I can tell about my

friends

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child. My friend always was often busy with her work. She did not spend any time with her boy. After some time her child had new dangerous

friends

. They all together became

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drug addicts. In

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such

way, guardians

also

can be disciplined to decrease

number

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of criminals. So they will take

care

after

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their adults.