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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Other feel that these forms of media will never disappear . What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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During the 21st century due to advanced technology,
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 have easy access to everything they want. Due to
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, nowadays learning
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 became easier because of the availability of
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, a set of
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 believe that printed books will disappear soon
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, few others feel that the traditional way of learning will not vanish. In my opinion, I completely believe that learning through printed versions will not be disappeared. To commence with, it is easy to access
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. Reading through
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 is easy and
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 it is possible to download with free of cost. At the same time, printed books are costly and
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 need to wait to deliver them after ordering. Due to
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,
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 think
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 as a time-consuming process so, for easy convenience
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 like to read online and
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 tendency had inclined a lot during the pandemic period because of the closure of colleges and schools.
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, even though
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 are easy to access
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 may not give any inner satisfaction to the learner.
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, during the covid-19 pandemic situation children were taken online classes but they are not happy about that and many students
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 demand to open schools.
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, spending a lot of time reading
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 may cause shoulder pain, vision problems and so on.
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, it is clear that
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 cannot compromise the traditional way of learning at any cost. In a nutshell,
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people
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 prefer to use
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 for reference
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, for a long time reading
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 like to have printed version of books.
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, In my opinion, I strongly believe that whatever advancements happen
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 the traditional method of learning will exist.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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