A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Plenty of sites in the universe
emphasis
on Replace the word
emphasise
tourism
which is a
original wellspring of revenue. Badly, Change the article
an
tourism
might be bring
a fount of Change the verb form
bring
obstacle
if it is not good Add an article
an obstacle
operate
. Add the particle
to operate
This
essay will discuss that without any correct manipulate there will be many problems
, I agree that traveler
into any Fix the agreement mistake
travelers
countries
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country
have
some difficulty.
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has
In
the one hand, Change preposition
On
now a days
many Correct the word
nowadays
countries
all of
the world true out to attract people of different places to meet their land. It is one of Change preposition
over
tendency
that Add an article
the tendency
a tendency
enhance
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enhances
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the economic
economic
of their labour market. How many tourists are coming to their country as much as they are earning Replace the word
economy
money
.
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?
Furthermore
, how we know tourism
is considered as
an industry because of Change preposition
apply
profit
that it Correct article usage
the profit
make
possible. Change the verb form
makes
For example
, TURKEY is one of the tourist countries
that major part of their economic supply by tourism
. Eventually, the lands which accept more traveler
into Change the spelling
traveller
there
they can attract more Correct your spelling
where
money
to their economic system due to spend
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spending
money
by visitors.
On the other hand
, tourists have some problems
that bring with themselves
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Firstly
, they have different
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a different
culture
that may be not parallel to Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
culture
of Correct article usage
the culture
destination
. Correct article usage
the destination
Secondly
, governments must take measures to control mass
of visitors. And Add an article
the mass
a mass
finally
, they are cause
of crowd every place Add an article
the cause
a cause
such
as; public transportation, malls, bakeries which the comfort of locals is disturbed. For instance
, employees every morning get public transport to get to their job that due to traffic jam on the street or traffic in subway they could late to workplace
. Add an article
the workplace
Thus
, visitors are cause problems
as a result
for governments, resident
and Fix the agreement mistake
residents
also
discipline.
In conclusion, this
essay discussed that travelers
come to the Change the spelling
travellers
countries
; they have some advantages like bring money
which is injected into the economic
of their country. Replace the word
economy
However
, they have difficulty
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a difficulty
the difficulty
that is
transferred to structure of their country and who live in there. In my opinion, tourism
has many problems
that require to manage before tourists allowing to come for relaxing.Submitted by m.younesi7093 on
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