A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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of their labour market. How many tourists are coming to their country as much as they are earning
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an industry because of
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possible.
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, TURKEY is one of the tourist
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that major part of their economic supply by
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. Eventually, the lands which accept more
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they can attract more
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that may be not parallel to
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, governments must take measures to control
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of visitors. And
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of crowd every place
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as; public transportation, malls, bakeries which the comfort of locals is disturbed.
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, employees every morning get public transport to get to their job that due to traffic jam on the street or traffic in subway they could late to
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for governments,
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discipline. In conclusion,
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come to the
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; they have some advantages like bring
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which is injected into the
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of their country.
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transferred to structure of their country and who live in there. In my opinion,
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has many
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that require to manage before tourists allowing to come for relaxing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • hospitality industry
  • tourist influx
  • cultural commodification
  • ecological footprint
  • economic diversification
  • carrying capacity
  • cultural sensitivity
  • destination marketing
  • travel advisories
  • visitor management
  • impact assessment
  • tourism revenues
  • authentic experience
  • visitor satisfaction
  • conservation efforts
  • seasonal fluctuation
  • social sustainability
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