A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
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money
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tourism
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where
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spend
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money
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On the other hand
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themselves
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the cause
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as a result
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residents
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travelers
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travellers
countries
; they have some advantages like bring Use synonyms
money
which is injected into the Use synonyms
economic
of their country. Replace the word
economy
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difficulty
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a difficulty
the difficulty
that is
transferred to structure of their country and who live in there. In my opinion, Linking Words
tourism
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problems
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