people are using a lot of online language translation apps .Do the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

Many
individuals
prefer using online language translation
applications
.
This
trend has got both merits and demerits.
To begin
with,internet connectivity and improved technologies have increased the fluency on using the online
application
because the information is readily available to the consumer and not only one specific information but
also
several pieces of information for the clients to pick from
consequently
this
has increased the
level
of knowledge and understanding of
individuals
.
In addition
,language
application
has led to
increasing
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in learning the diversity that
individuals
have in various sectors
for instance
how the practice of cultural difference
are
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implemented in certain communities.To illustrate
this
,Turkana annual festive event is the common event known worldwide and the internet
application
has improved the
level
of understanding of these functions.
Thus
,internet
applications
provide
the
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platform for learning. Online
applications
also
have got some demerits too.
Firstly
,it has watered down
tight
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culture
that existed before by allowing copying of western
culture
well illustrated in youths who would like to copy what the western countries do
as a result
they forget the normal routine of their
culture
.
Secondly
,online
applications
are addictive and make
individuals
glued on their screens and
consequently
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a lot of productive time wasted and even money lost in many activities
for instance
gambling.
Thus
,online
application
is partly responsible for the loss of generation
culture
as they say "dot com generation". To conclude,I support the online
application
because of the ability to improve the
level
of understanding but again
on the other hand
regulatory bodies should filter the
level
of content that
are
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made available to the population especially the youths in order to avoid moral decay.
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