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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
In
this
 twenty-
first
 modern century, while there are a plethora of positive sides to become mastery of another
language
, I mostly agree with the view that speaking a different
language
 definitely makes huge social as well as practical troubles.
However
, it has been appreciated to learn other languages in many circumstances.
First
 of all, talking with exotic
language
 convey difficulties due to, it cannot express owns thought and views properly. The practice of Latin
language
for example
 is hard to feel comfortable with because of its ambiguous nature.
Additionally
, there is a communication gap that continuously
exist
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 between the native and
non-native
 personnel. The reason is that both individuals are not clear about their absolute meaning.
Therefore
, using
other
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another language
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language
 invariably difficult for its
non-native
 speakers.
Secondly
,
non-native
 speakers sometimes feel ignorant by the domestic people because the domestic people try to avoid their view in many situations. Shopping in the foreign market, in fact, is relatively complicated if there is a chance of ignorance. Meantime,
language
 is used by non-indigenous people unconsciously change the actual meaning. As a consequence, exogenous
language
 arises social and practical constraints.
However
, the Application of
non-native
language
 widens the capability and the skills because it helps you to learn new things. Teaching with the English
language
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 instance, act as an aid that not only boarding knowledge but
also
 discloses plenty of new opportunities,
inresulting
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resulting
in resulting
its
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 immense appreciation all over the world. In conclusion, though the usage of
non-native
language
 may increase one’s potentiality, its equivocal and implicit meaning makes trouble for its user in the field of social and practical application.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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