Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

While it is undeniable that many individuals in various countries around the world are turning to follow up the
news
over the internet, some people argued that
newpapares
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are more
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. I totally disagree
to
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this
opinion for many compelling justifications, as
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will be explained below. The
first
reason for my position is that the internet is much faster in spreading the
news
than the conventional paper method.
For instance
, it might reach
to
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thousands of followers by one click
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within

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with in
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ten seconds period. Through the
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of online
technologies
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it requires
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minimum
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effort, but
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depend on series of actions to ensure that readers physically receive the papers.
Moreover
, there are extra costs expected to the
newspaper
readers.
Therefore
, people are shifting toward getting the
news
from digital means rather than printed materials. Another reason why
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online sources can be reliable for the new generations is that a person can follow more focused
news
.
Instead
of buying or having
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an
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access to unnecessary information, it is much preferable for many to trace sites that
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their interest.
Specilized
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digital subscription magazines,
for example
,
such
as Medical Latest Inventions, had millions of prescribers compared to few
thousands
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of paper version users.
Consequently
, more and more citizens are in
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of converting to softcopies.
Finally
, there is an increase in
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environmental awareness among many people.
Hence
, it is better to save lost resources wasted on the
newspaper
industries
such
as woods, inks, machines and
storaging
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storage

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facilities. On
an annual surveys
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,
this
could lead to tremendous
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positive

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trends. To conclude, from my perspective, I am against depending on
newspaper
as a main source of
news
.
This
is because softcopies are quicker to be distributed, concentrated and environmental friendly.
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