It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?

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talents.

While

one group of people believe that certain features

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as music and sport in

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are with people from born, another group are against

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this

opinion, they agree that successful persons work as hard as they can to achieve whatever they want. I completely agree with

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view. On the one hand, It is

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believed that some of our features are gifts which come from

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,

for instance

, having

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voice for singing or making fantastic

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at

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ages

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. If anyone finds their own strongest and

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to discover the best path in it, they will be successful. In the past, families forced their children to continue their ancient

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, they

faught

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their

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expand that business because of

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.

On the other hand

, there are many reasons

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why there is not any strong

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between achievement and talent.

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it is obvious that some talents

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with me

from

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childhood but there is only

a

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proof. It seems to me that, if I was into a specific activity like playing exercise, I would be

to

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the way to catch my dream. In

this

way, I can work as hard as I can and take part in

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clubs.

Second,

one's personality is different from others,

thus

, realising our weaknesses and powers

are

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highly beneficial for guiding us in a good way.

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my

stand point

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,

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gift

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only is

a

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proof, for sure we have some features when we

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born,

however

, working and

practicing

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are

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far more important than

personally

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talens

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talents

.

To conclude

, There are

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of concepts about

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powerties

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power ties

poverties

.

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some of them are from

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God

, it seems to me that our desire to unlock our dream is more significant

that

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whatever we have

been

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gotten from

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ages

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.