Some children buy large amounts of toys to play with. Do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern era,

toys

become a valuable

assest

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asset

assist

in

child's

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a child's

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world, they

very

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close to

attach

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with

puppet

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puppets

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. children have been purchasing a huge number of

dolls

to play

, they

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think is the precious stuff

which

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that

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is having

a

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more.

However

, I strongly agree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

Fistly

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Firstly

First

, the kids would like to have a ton level of

dolls

because they will reduce their loneliness from playing

a large amounts

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a large amount

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of

toys

.

This

means, nowadays both parents are

worked

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so they cannot

spent

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many

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more time

wit

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with

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their infant,

thus

, they want a

co partner

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when they are playing,

thus

, they buy tons of puppets with their

parents

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parent's

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permission. Taking western countries, both father and mother are being worked,

hence

, they purchase a lot of

dolls

to

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their infants,

consequently

, a child does not feel

loneliness

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. Obviously,

this

can help to reduce mental related illness.

Scondly

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Secondly

,

this

trend gives more wisdom to

toddler

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toddlers

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.

In other words

, modern era

toys

are not only gives happiness but

also

gives more knowledge and creative idea too,

hence

, parents buy more

dolls

for toddlers.

For instance

, clay is most popular among

the

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infants due to

this

can help to think creatively and think out of

box

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, countless children like to purchase

this

kind of stuff. Undoubtedly, buying more

dolls

give more wisdom and innovative thought too. To conclude, a child spends

a

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enormous time with their puppet when

ther

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their

the

they

chilhood

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childhood

period. They like to buy a massive amount of

dolls

because they

ant

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want

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to reduce their loneliness and improve their wisdom too. They should be bought more

toys

because

this

helps a lot than

anyother

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any other

things

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thing

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. I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

process is conducive to building a healthy society.