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Some people believe that we succeed in sport due to our inborn talent. Others argue that continuous working on oneself is a key to success. What do you think?

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Some
people
 agree that talented athletes were born gifted. Others argue that raw talent is not the main feature that helps
sports
 players to master a sport skill. In my opinion, despite the fact that being born with special talents is very beneficial, the skills that contribute to success in one's
sports
 path are made from effort and determination. It is often said but rarely understood that continuation of
practice
 is the key to gold medals in
sports
.
People
 in superior leagues are more experienced and more sophisticated than the others and in order to become them, it takes determination and countless hours of
practice
. Adults should teach children to value
hard working
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people
 more than those who were born special as
this
 mindset allows non-gifted children to exceed their limits and dare to dream big.
Additionally
, knowing the importance of putting effort into
practice
 keeps those with natural aptitudes enthusiastic and allows them to develop their skills to the
next
 level.
Furthermore
, many successful
sports
 players were not sophisticated nor outstanding in the field of
sports
 during their childhood.
This
 proves that even
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thought
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 some top athletes are known to have possessed their notable inborn talents, there are
also
 those who are able to succeed without them. To sum up, innate specials make a
sport
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 player's life easier but it is not nessecery for one in order to be the finest.
On the other hand
,
practice
 and determination
is
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 crucial and is the key to prosperity.
Thus
,
people
 should admire those who are hardworking and determined.
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