In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to keep?

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often argued that,

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they are so dejected now. In, the forthcoming essay, I will explain some reasons and some solutions regarding

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with, the predominant reason, why adolescents are becoming despondent, despite

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all modern facilities are available in their life because they give more value

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their profession and materialistic things. For achieving their passion they leave their home and family.when they got everything in their life they started feel

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no one with whom, they can share their problems and pain.

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health

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say, 50%

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by depression because they live alone.

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, cars, brought happiness but at the end of the

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they miss

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of love.

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, in past people live with extended family but in the modern

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family , youngsters did not open up. To solve

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awareness campaign program in social media and in schools

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of family and friends.

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on mental peace to find it ;we need to reduce dependence on things and

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In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to keep?

Fully explain your ideas

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Today food often travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only ate food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this idea outweigh the disadvantages?

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