Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, a number of nations assume that losing natural habitat is the most important
issue
.
However
, some others believe that the significant
issue
can be related to
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.
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essay considers necessary subjects like destroying species of flora, fauna and global warming. In my view,
environmental
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an environmental
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problem like global warming is the major
issue
that can be damaged many
type
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of animals. On the one side, destroying wildlife habitat has two main problems for all people around the world.
First
, the research of many scientists is associated with fauna, flora, which can use them to produce many drugs for humans.
Second
, animals are part of
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food chain that they consume meat, milk and other things.
Thus
, without fauna and flora citizen’s life have
serious
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a serious
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problem
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that nobody can survive without
foods
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food
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.
For example
, deforestation can destroy native residence and
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biodiversity which
this
issue
can impact on
damaging
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the damaging
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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. On the other side,
environmental
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an environmental
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issue
like global warming has
serious
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a serious
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impact on people’s lives.
To begin
with, human activities can cause the increase of
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greenhouse gases that has negative effects on air pollution and animal’s lives.
For instance
, using chemical and pesticides products in agriculture can release carbon dioxide and nitrogen
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the air. These products increase the level of
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pollution and cause of global warming. In my view, Global warming is the major
issue
that all countries have to contribute
with
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this
situation. Due to, human activities in agriculture or cut
tress
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trees
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for producing paper and wood goods have negatively
affect
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in
natural
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the natural
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ecosystem and can be destroyed them.
Consequently
, the most significant
issue
for today’s world is climate change. In conclusion, losing many types of animals and plants has
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influence
in
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human’s food and medicine research.
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the biggest reason for
this
situation is
global
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warning that people can create it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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