Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communicating and people use more and more of social media to communicate and to follow news and events. Some people think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion with example.
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media
all the time to be updated on what is happening around the world and to connect their
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I will discuss more the benefits than the drawbacks of social Add a comma
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as well as my opinion.
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To begin
with, in this
day and age it is because of the pandemic most people
are isolated in their homes and with the help of social media
their use it frequently in order
to communicate easily to their
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In addition
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work
a
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they
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media
to get the
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into
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behaviour
also
for the advertisement of their products. Moreover
, in order
to be updated, most people
are relying more on social media
applications for the
current events and news because it is more accessible and easy. Correct article usage
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For example
, CNN
and New York Times applications you can only download through your phone and you can turn on the notifications so that you can follow the latest headlines.
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On the other hand
, using frequently of social media
is has negative impacts also
to people
. We are using social media
in order
to know the news and events. For instance
, some applications are spreading fake reports and making stories in order
to catch people
's attention. As a result
, we need to be sure that our sources of news are more reliable and trustworthy.
To conclude, this
essay has discussed the pros and cons and in my overall opinion, we cannot overestimate the importance of social media
in our lives because it provides more valuable and advantageous in our daily living.Submitted by ding
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