It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Various species of
animals
are getting extinct, some are due to natural
course of Add an article
the natural
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environment
environnment
. Whereas, some are due to the interference of human beings. To which, some people do opine that we should turn a blind eye towards Correct article usage
the environnment
this
phenomenon. I certainly disagree to
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with
this
statement and I would justify my statement in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, we as human
are completely responsible for Fix the agreement mistake
humans
this
mess. Due to our selfishness, we have destroyed animal's natural habitat
, and Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
this
is positively one of the factor
which is contributing to these fauna's depletion. Change to a plural noun
factors
For instance
, deforestation for construction
of buildings or towers. Correct article usage
the construction
Secondly
, human greed is also
one of the reason
. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
Plethora
of Add an article
A plethora
The plethora
animals
are
being killed in order to extract some or the other kind of resources, which in turn provide economical benefits. Change the verb form
is
For example
, poaching of elephant's trunk for ivory. Thirdly
, It is all due to the interference of human
with the environment that climate has been changing and Fix the agreement mistake
humans
in-turn
creating turmoil for these Correct your spelling
in turn
animals
. Such
as,
fire in Remove the comma
apply
forest
, landslides, extreme heat or pollution have contributed to adverse climate conditions.
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forests
Although
, there are
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is
certain
phenomenon, to which no one Add an article
a certain
have
any answers. To illustrate, Change the verb form
has
extinction
of Dinosaurs or dodos took place due to the natural disaster and humans do not have Correct article usage
the extinction
any
active role Correct your spelling
an
behind
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in
this
. Whereas, In contrast
considering the above given
reasons, I do completely believe that we as Add a hyphen
above-given
responsible
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a responsible
citizen
of Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
this
nation could combat this
scenario of extinction by protecting the endangered species, this
can be done by building a natural habitat for these different or rare breeds or by enforcing stringet
laws against the businesses that harm Correct your spelling
stringent
animals
for their benefits.
To conclude, though everything would not be in our control but
sometimes there are certain measures that if taken or followed appropriately by humans can actually protect and preserve the declining animal kingdom.Remove the conjunction
apply
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