Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that what a pre-schooler go through is the most influential to their future

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, others think that their teenage

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, specifically at school, will have more impact. I think that both viewpoints are valid to a certain extent because each has its own effects. On the

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hand, there are some reasons why

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's childhood has the biggest impact on their future

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reason is that the

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of a

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plays a crucial role to shape their personality. During these

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, a

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spends most of their time with parents and other family members. If a

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is brought up in love and care, he or she will develop emotionally and socially. Another reason is that pre-schoolers are at the most impressionable age

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when they are likely to take in any information unconsciously. To be specific, if an adult behaves inappropriately, a

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will pick up that non-standard behaviour.

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, if a father usually shows anger towards several issues, his

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is more likely to develop that habit.

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, experiences as a teenager are

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significant.

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, when

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becomes a teenager, home is no longer the only place where experiences take place, but teenagers are now under the influence of their teachers and peers. Teenagers are highly influenced by their peers, and

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those who fall in with the wrong crowd

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may easily have consequences.

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, school time creates a well-rounded person.

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is because a school offers teenagers fundamental knowledge needed for their future career path and social awareness. In conclusion, it seems that both the

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of a

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and a teenager's

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are of equal impact in different ways.