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Some people believe that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the environment, others maintain that the major profit is the development of world business. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion.

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People are split on the governing advantages of global collaboration. Some hold the view that improvement on
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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 is
the
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 major benefit,
however
, others the revenue gained from international trading. Form my prospect, the profits matter more and I will analyze both the opinions and the forces behind them in
this
 essay. On one hand, the unprecedented economic benefits stem from some factors. The globalization process does lift
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 standards of not only residents in developed
countries
 but
also
 people in
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 world through the division of work in the overall supply chain. Richer
countries
 provide technologies and management, while poorer
countries
 supply
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, land and resources, which improves employment in both
countries
.
Countries
 in the
third
 world push the industrial level and urbanization process by the construction of basic facilities and workforce piling into cities from the rural areas, through which economies boom. At the same time, developed
countries
 manage to obtain
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, land and natural resources at a lower cost and
also
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 to deal with intensive competition.
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,
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 develop slower receive technologies and management experiences, which is an advantage to their upgrade in the future.
On the other hand
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international cooperation does
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 in environmental protection, but in a less evident way. Some Collaborative operations have been launched to preserve endangered species and hinder
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climate change,
however
, the issue of economic development is still the most vital challenge faced by poorer
countries
 and they cannot tackle environmental problems more thoroughly at the cost of
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 splurge. In a word, more margins earned is and will be the foremost boon of synergy all over the
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instead
 of environmental benefits now and in the forthcoming future.
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  • international cooperation
  • environmental policies
  • green technologies
  • combating climate change
  • global trade
  • foreign investments
  • international standards
  • regulations
  • global sustainability
  • mutually beneficial
  • long term well-being
  • complexity
  • balanced approach
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